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Een schrijfopdracht waaraan mijn vrouw meedeed...schrijf een reclamespotje voor een product wat je echt niet lekker vindt. Douwe Egberts heeft dit artikel ook gelezen, en stuurde als dank ijsthee...veel leesplezier: Johan

by bianca_b, 15th June 2001.


Writing a commercial is not easy,but will it sell???

Focus in, on a castle, somewhere in The Netherlands.
In that castle are people trying to lose some weight.
In one of the rooms, there is a man lying on a massage table.
He tries to relax, and is waiting for the masseuse.

(music is building up an exiting atmosphere)
The masseuse comes in, takes a bottle from a shelf.
Then, at that moment, a waiter comes in,
With a refreshment in his hands.
He takes the bottle over, from the masseuse
Opens the bottle?
Puts a lot of cold oil on the man?s back?(reaction:)
The man shook up, the reaction is a kind of stressed
It is taking time to calm him down again
And when he does, he sees the refreshment.

(action:)
He takes a zip of his drink
Forgets what just has happened,
You?ll see him relaxing again

(Voice:)
? Pickwick Lemon Ice Tea. There is no better way to cool down?.

(zoom out)
The masseuse starts to give the man a massage.

Package shows up.
Text appears: ?Now also available in the flavours Peach, and Green Tea.?? Copyright Bianca Boonstra, 15-6-2001.
All rights reserved

Note from the author: Pickwick ice tea is a well selling product. The assignment told us to write a commercial for a product I didn't like. The tea is too sweet, in my opinion, but I hope that won't effect your opinion.

Thanks Candice923, for bringing this challenge to us.http://www.writtenbyme.com/content/50173

met toestemming van de auteur.

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